My English Paper -- GRADE :^)

I don't want to include my whole paper (it's 5 pages long) on the blog - but I will put down the whole comment from my instructor --

"I enjoy the way you interweave all the pieces of this essay. The Clark's story provides a nice framework - inspiration for the rest of us to wake up and take action. Your own personal story works well in this context: explaining the way we have lived for so long and showing what caused you to start making changes. Informative, thought- provoking, and ultimately persuasive."

Grade:?? 30/30 - A

(My first essay got a 29/30 - A, also) hehe :^)