I don't want to include my whole paper (it's 5 pages long) on the blog - but I will put down the whole comment from my instructor --
"I enjoy the way you interweave all the pieces of this essay. The Clark's story provides a nice framework - inspiration for the rest of us to wake up and take action. Your own personal story works well in this context: explaining the way we have lived for so long and showing what caused you to start making changes. Informative, thought- provoking, and ultimately persuasive."
Grade:?? 30/30 - A
(My first essay got a 29/30 - A, also) hehe :^)
Friday, May 15
Thursday, May 14
Not Snow ??? mid April
Spring is in the air -- well at least this day it was ;-p
Perfect weather - perfect fun!
family time is the best time!
more fun!
Birthday Boy :)
My boy turned 26 recently -- it was a fun day!
The Blazer's didn't win tonight and lost the division title -- sorry Georgie :-(
wonder if he won anything?
love!
I gave him this card - it plays the "chicken dance song" when you open it - it's the song that plays in Georgie's head when nothing else is occupying his great expansive mind ;-p
sharing a moment with Jules
Wednesday, May 13
More Pictures
Some Pictures
Monday, May 11
I can't find it!! -- FOUND IT!
Pictures soon :^) :-p
I can't find the cord to the camera so that I can down-load and put up some photos of the past couple of weeks...
Yeahyeahyeah :-):-):-)
I can't find the cord to the camera so that I can down-load and put up some photos of the past couple of weeks...
Yeahyeahyeah :-):-):-)
Saturday, May 9
Well...it's done :^)
I've just finished my 2nd Essay - an argument paper - on the needs for more small farms...I will let you know what my grade is when it gets returned later next week.
In the meantime, I've registered for Summer Quarter - ENG 102 (1 large paper for the term) and Math 090 (then one more, 095) before College Math (100+).
Tim & Livvy will be moving to Florida sometime at the end of June or early July, so this will keep me busy and not as lonely as I might be otherwise...sniff...Dooooonnn't gooooooo..........
I also finished reading the Twilight series, again...it's better the 2nd time around :-p
...And the Church Roadshows are done!! Tim and Livvy are very happy about this...they had a GREAT time writing the script, directing and choreographing the show, but it was long and hard and FUNFUNFUN but 'it's done'...They won the "Best Choreography" award (done by Tim to Michael Jackson's Thriller) and Livvy got a beautiful bouquet of spring flowers as a gift! the show was awesome, by the way :~)
In the meantime, I've registered for Summer Quarter - ENG 102 (1 large paper for the term) and Math 090 (then one more, 095) before College Math (100+).
Tim & Livvy will be moving to Florida sometime at the end of June or early July, so this will keep me busy and not as lonely as I might be otherwise...sniff...Dooooonnn't gooooooo..........
I also finished reading the Twilight series, again...it's better the 2nd time around :-p
...And the Church Roadshows are done!! Tim and Livvy are very happy about this...they had a GREAT time writing the script, directing and choreographing the show, but it was long and hard and FUNFUNFUN but 'it's done'...They won the "Best Choreography" award (done by Tim to Michael Jackson's Thriller) and Livvy got a beautiful bouquet of spring flowers as a gift! the show was awesome, by the way :~)
Tuesday, May 5
Food??
Okay - here goes....My English instructor has had us reading many essays and articles on...
** environment & industrialization
** ecology
** fast food vs 'slow food' (never heard of that!? - me neither!)(decades old!)
** The Transition Movement (started in England decades ago)
** Permaculture (Tim added this one- started in Australia decades ago)
** CSA's (thanks Lynnette and Melissa)
** Oil, gas, coal depletion
** Wind, solar, hydro and nuclear power options
** Suburbia (taking last of the good farm lands)
etc etc
I'm interested; I'm reading and studying; the Stake has us planting (for food and family-time)
All of these things are pointing towards Americans taking a careful look at the food we eat, where it comes from, whether or not it's actually healthy, how we eat (and how much!) - who tells us how , when and how much we should eat (government?)...as a country and as a culture, we WILL have to learn how to grow our own food, cook our own food and we WILL have less of it -- and all that's a good thing!
Anyway, my interest is peaked - I'll keep you posted :^)
** environment & industrialization
** ecology
** fast food vs 'slow food' (never heard of that!? - me neither!)(decades old!)
** The Transition Movement (started in England decades ago)
** Permaculture (Tim added this one- started in Australia decades ago)
** CSA's (thanks Lynnette and Melissa)
** Oil, gas, coal depletion
** Wind, solar, hydro and nuclear power options
** Suburbia (taking last of the good farm lands)
etc etc
I'm interested; I'm reading and studying; the Stake has us planting (for food and family-time)
All of these things are pointing towards Americans taking a careful look at the food we eat, where it comes from, whether or not it's actually healthy, how we eat (and how much!) - who tells us how , when and how much we should eat (government?)...as a country and as a culture, we WILL have to learn how to grow our own food, cook our own food and we WILL have less of it -- and all that's a good thing!
Anyway, my interest is peaked - I'll keep you posted :^)
Friday, May 1
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